Re: [Roll] [roll] #161 (security-threats): AD review

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#161: AD review


Comment (by mcr@sandelman.ca):

 Replying to [ticket:161 mcr@…]:
 > Your one use of RFC 2119 language outside Section 8 is unnecessary.
 >
 >    RPL uses multicast as part of it's protocol,
 >    and therefore mechanisms which RPL uses to secure this traffic MAY be
 >    applicable to MPL control traffic as well: the important part is that
 >    the threats are similiar.
 >
 > s/it's/its/
 > s/MAY/might also/
 > s/similiar/similar/
 >
 > Furthermore, while your use of 2119 in Section 8 is fine with me, it is
 > not in harmony with the boilerplate you have included after the
 > Abstract.
 >
 > I suggest you move it to Section 3, and have it read...

 I've removed that one reference to MAY, and removed the 2119 reference.

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 Reporter:  mcr@sandelman.ca       |       Owner:  mcr@sandelman.ca
     Type:  enhancement            |      Status:  assigned
 Priority:  major                  |   Milestone:  milestone1
Component:  security-threats       |     Version:
 Severity:  Submitted WG Document  |  Resolution:
 Keywords:                         |
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/roll/trac/ticket/161#comment:4>
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