Re: [Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: (with COMMENT)

Charles Perkins <charliep@lupinlodge.com> Wed, 18 August 2021 20:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Erik,

Please excuse the unusually long delay it has taken for us to respond to 
your comments.

Regarding the following:

 >  Erik Kline No Objection
 > Comment (2021-04-21)

 > [[ nits ]]

 > [ section 4.1 ]

 > * "sets its IPv6 address" could perhaps be something like
 >   "sets a selected IPv6 source address"

Fixed.

 > [ section 4.3 ]

 > * "r" is not depicted in Figure 3?  Probably "X"?  Or update Figure to
 >   match the field description.

Fixed.

Regards,
Charlie P.


On 4/21/2021 7:47 PM, Erik Kline via Datatracker wrote:
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> [[ nits ]]
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> [ section 4.1 ]
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> * "sets its IPv6 address" could perhaps be something like
>    "sets a selected IPv6 source address"
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> [ section 4.3 ]
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> * "r" is not depicted in Figure 3?  Probably "X"?  Or update Figure to
>    match the field description.
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