[Roll] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with COMMENT)
"Benoit Claise" <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 08 July 2015 13:16 UTC
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Subject: [Roll] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with COMMENT)
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Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >From the OPS-DIR review done by Menachem: The document is quite readable. Section 2.1 could be improved if for each parameter defined a reference would be given to indicate where the parameter is defined. I found most of them in: draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-12 but for example, I'm not sure what the Proactive_Forwarding flag is used for. Section 4 discusses Security Considerations but I think that some phrases in the paragraph are too general. Example: "other methods for security should be applied" does not indicate what these methods are or where to look for them. Another Example: "To protect attacks from outside of the network, unneccessary DHCPv6 packets should be filtered on the border router between the ROLL network and the Internet" - what is meant by "unnecessary DHCPv6 packets"? NITS ==== Section 2.3 First Paragraph Second Sentence - Remove 'is' OLD ==> Note that there may be cases in which a node may fail is to join a domain SUGGEST ==> Note that there may be cases in which a node may fail to join a domain Section 2.3 Last Paragraph is not clear. Perhaps the last sentence should read "In this case" (instead of "In the case"). Section 2.6 - First Sentence - Not Clear Is the update rate not to be more than twice the Information Refresh Time? Not clear to me how many updates are allowed in an Information Refresh Time. Should the word 'of' be replaced by 'the'. "more often than twice the Information Refresh Time". Suggest rephrasing this paragraph.
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