Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-41

[Ines Robles <[e-mail]>]

Hi Alvaro,

Many thanks for your review. We addressed your comments on version 42 (
https://github.com/roll-wg/useofrplinfo/blob/master/draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-42.txt
)
Should be do a manual post request or wait until 14th Nov?

Thank you again,

Ines.



On Mon, Nov 9, 2020 at 8:57 PM Alvaro Retana <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Dear authors:
>
> Thank you for all the work on this draft.
>
> I have a couple of comments in-line -- nothing hard to address.  I
> mostly looked at the diffs (wrt -31) and so my comments are just on
> new text.
>
> I want to progress this draft with unaware-leaves -- to make it easier
> on the IESG.  I'll start the IETF LC when both are ready.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Alvaro.
>
>
> >From idnits:
>
>   ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8138]), which it
>      shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
>      documents in question.
>
>
>
> [Line numbers from idnits.]
>
>
> ...
> 66         4.  Updates to RFC6553, RFC6550 and RFC8138 . . . . . . . . . .
> .   7
> 67           4.1.  Updates to RFC6550: Advertising External Routes with
> Non-
> 68                 Storing Mode Signaling. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> .   7
> 69           4.2.  Updates to RFC6553: Indicating the new RPI Option Type.
> .   8
> 70           4.3.  Updates to RFC6550:
> 71                 Configuration Options and Mode
> 72                 of Operation  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> .  11
> 73           4.4.  Updates to RFC6550: Indicating the new RPI in the
> 74                 DODAG Configuration option Flag.  . . . . . . . . . . .
> .  12
> 75           4.5.  Updates to RFC8138: Indicating the way to decompress
> with
> 76                 the new RPI Option Type.  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> .  13
>
> [nit - no action needed, just a suggestion] Group all the updates to
> rfc6550: either in one sub-section or in consecutive ones.
>
>
> ...
> 493     4.3.  Updates to RFC6550: Configuration Options and Mode of
> Operation
>
> 495        RFC6550 section 6.7.6 describes the DODAG Configuration
> Option.  In
> 496        this option are a series of Flags in the first octet of the
> payload.
> 497        These flags are described by the DODAG Configuration Option
> Flags
> 498        registry [dodagcfg], in section 20.14 of RFC6550.
>
> 500        Anticipating future work to revise RPL relating to how the LLN
> and
> 501        DODAG is configured, this document changes the interpretation
> of the
> 502        [dodagcfg] Registry to be limited to Mode-of-Operation (MOP)
> 503        specific.  The MOP is described in [RFC6550] section 6.3.1.  The
> 504        Options Flags Registry is renamed, and applies to MOP values
> zero (0)
> 505        to six (6) only, leaving the flags reserved for MOP value seven
> (7).
>
> 507        In addition, this document reserves MOP value 7 for future
> expansion.
>
> [] NEW>
>    Section 6.7.6 of RFC6550 describes the DODAG Configuration Option as
>    containing a series of Flags in the first octet of the payload