[Roll] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-42

Henning Rogge via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 07 December 2020 07:48 UTC

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Reviewer: Henning Rogge
Review result: Ready


the Rtgdir asked me again to review the draft "useofrplinfo" (last review I did
was for draft 25). Please note that I do NOT follow the ROLL WG.

The draft has made a huge step forward in readability compared to last year.

The extended terminology section helps a lot to understand the document.
All the figures/tables have been cleaned up considerably and they all use the
"Figure" term instead a mixture of figures and tables. Abbreviations are also
used more consistently, which both helps with the table cleanup and the
readability in general.

I think draft 42 resolves the issues I had in my earlier review.

Henning Rogge