[Roll] ARE: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-12: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, "Routing Over Low power and Lossy networks" <roll@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: [Roll] ARE: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Murray:

Many thanks for your time, review, and in-depth checking.

Let's see below:


 
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> COMMENT:
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> The glossary lists "OF" and "OCP", but those acronyms are not present in the
> document.

Removed the terms. Added subDAG instead to comply with Tiru's comment in a parallel thread.


> 
> I had to do some bouncing between documents while reading Section 3.  Figure
> 1 shows what appear to be five flags, not four, and says "T" is declared in
> "position 2", though in the diagram it looks like the third position.  If position
> numbering is zero-based, that should be made clear (it's not in RFC
> 6550 either).

Actually it is indicated in RFC 6550, though well hidden, see https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6550#section-20.14
See also https://www.iana.org/assignments/rpl/rpl.xhtml#dodag-config-option-flags 


Again, many thanks for your thorough checks, 

Please see https://github.com/roll-wg/roll-turnon-rfc8138/commit/9984c51ef7c762dd357362aed7a85e822ccf6c24 and let me know if you think I should change/clarify something there.

Take care,

Pascal