Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-09.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Wed, 24 May 2023 16:33 UTC

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Comments: In-reply-to Konrad Iwanicki <iwanicki@mimuw.edu.pl> message dated "Fri, 19 May 2023 10:29:20 +0200."
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Subject: Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-09.txt
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Konrad Iwanicki <iwanicki@mimuw.edu.pl> wrote:
    > On 18/05/2023 20:03, Michael Richardson wrote:
    >> Konrad Iwanicki <iwanicki@mimuw.edu.pl> wrote: > Should I go once more
    >> over the draft?
    >>
    >> Sure, I need to do a top-to-bottom read-through myself.

    > I went through the entire draft a few times. It is definitely much
    > clearer now. I did some more editing, though (mostly
    > clarifications/reordering and minor copy-editing):

    > https://github.com/roll-wg/draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority/pull/16

okay, merged, and I cleared/checked the other edits/pull requests.
I will post a new version on Monday.

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