Re: [Roll] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-09

Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi> Thu, 19 August 2021 18:31 UTC

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Date: Thu, 19 Aug 2021 21:31:28 +0300
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: Charlie Perkins <charles.perkins@earthlink.net>
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-09
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Charlie Perkins writes:
> Hello Tero,
> 
> Thanks for your comments, useful as always.  Please excuse the unusually 
> long
> delay it has taken for us to respond to your comments.  Please see a bit of
> follow-up below.

Changes look good. 

> On 3/22/2021 9:41 AM, Tero Kivinen via Datatracker wrote:
>  > The title of the draft has some acronyms which are not expanded 
> (AODV, P2P)
>  > and if you expand them the title comes way too long. I would propose 
> a usable
>  > title, which might not need to use all possible acronyms, but would 
> better
>  > explain what this document is trying to do.
> 
> How about "Supporting Asymmetric Links in Low Power Networks"? Replacing 
> "LLNs" by "Low Power Networks" is probably O.K. because lossy is almost 
> implicit given low power (or, often, reality).

I think that title is good. 
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kivinen@iki.fi