[Roll] Gen-ART Telechat review for draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06

"Peter Yee" <peter@akayla.com> Wed, 08 July 2015 05:51 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Jul-07-2015
IETF LC End Date: Jun-30-2015
IESG Telechat date: Jul-09-2015

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as Standards Track
RFC. [Ready.]
The update from draft -04 to -06 handles my comments from the Last Call
review.  Thank you!

This draft describes a DHCPv6 option used to request MPL configuration
parameter sets.

Major Issues:  None.

Minor Issues: None.

Nits: None that I care to raise.