Re: [Roll] WGLC for draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-25

Remous-Aris Koutsiamanis <aris@ariskou.com> Fri, 03 June 2022 02:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] WGLC for draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-25
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Hello all,

I have just submitted two pull requests (#17 and #18) in relation to my 
review of this draft. They should show  up in github.

The first (#17) contains a set of typos and expressions which I fixed as 
part of reading the draft. It was easier for me directly modify the file 
and commit it. You should be able to easily pick and choose what to 
keep, of course.

The second (#18) contains comments on different parts of the draft, and 
should be self-explanatory.

Overall, the draft, while extensive, is reasonably understandable. Some 
parts which are not initially clear did clear up by the end of reading 
it, so no complaints here.

I also proposed some aesthetic improvements to aid in comprehension.

Overall, from my point of view its in a very good state and quite mature.

I await any questions or feedback on the specifics.

Best,
Aris


On 03/05/2022 17:26, Ines Robles wrote:
> Dear all,
>
> We have not received inputs on this.
>
> We really need reviews, please consider volunteering for that. If you 
> have any interest but need more time, please let us know
>
> Thank you very much,
>
> Ines and Dominique
>
> On Fri, Apr 8, 2022 at 4:26 PM Ines Robles 
> <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com> wrote:
>
>     Dear all,
>
>     A Working Group Last Call (WGLC) starts today (08th April) until
>     29th April for draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-25.
>
>     The draft is available here:
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection/
>
>     Please review this draft to see if you think that it is ready for
>     publication and send your comments to the list stating your view.
>
>     Thank you very much in advance,
>
>     Ines and Dominique.
>
>
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