[Roll] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 22 April 2021 07:44 UTC

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Subject: [Roll] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10: No Objection

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I concur with Roman's DISCUSS, especially around the use of SHOULD.  I'd go
further and ask why that's not a MUST, or in the alternative, provide some
guidance around why an implementer might legitimately decide against doing what
the SHOULD said.

The document shepherd writeup is more than two years old.

In Section 2, although "AODV-RPL Instance" is defined, it is present nowhere in
the document.  Also "ART Option" doesn't seem to be ordered correctly.

In Section 9, I suggest being clear that what you're actually updating are the
named sub-registries of the "Routing Protocol for Low Power and Lossy Networks
(RPL)" registry.