Re: [Roll] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-13: (with COMMENT)

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Wed, 09 September 2020 09:30 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
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Hello Alvaro:

This looks better, I agree, though  the difference is subtle.

I committed you rproposed change in https://github.com/roll-wg/roll-turnon-rfc8138/commit/dd8915c3205c8d530b9f2638ac537db254b5fbbb 

If that's OK I'll delay the publication to gather other review comment in 15?

Many thanks,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
> Sent: mardi 8 septembre 2020 22:00
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>rg>; Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
> <pthubert@cisco.com>om>; Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com>
> Cc: carlesgo@entel.upc.edu; roll@ietf.org; roll-chairs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-roll-
> turnon-rfc8138@ietf.org; Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
> Subject: RE: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-13:
> (with COMMENT)
> 
> Pascal
> 
> 
> Hi!
> 
> Sorry for commenting after you published -14, but I don't think that "SHOULD
> ensure" is a normatively enforceable action.  How about this?
> 
> OLD>
>    Though it is possible to roll back (see Section 5.3, the network operator
>    SHOULD ensure that the roll back operation is completed before adding
> nodes
>    that do not support [RFC8138].
> 
> 
> NEW>
>    Though it is possible to roll back (see Section 5.3), the roll back
>    operation SHOULD be complete before the network operator adds nodes
> that
>    do not support [RFC8138].
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Alvaro.
> 
> 
> On September 8, 2020 at 3:59:18 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
> (pthubert@cisco.com(mailto:pthubert@cisco.com)) wrote:
> 
> > Hello again Eric
> >
> > I published as -14:
> >
> > URL: https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-14.txt
> > Status:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138/
> > Html: https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-14.html
> > Htmlized:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-14
> > Diff:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-14
> >
> > Many thanks again!
> >
> > Pascal