[Roll] [roll] #177 (applicability-ami): Editorial Comments for ami draft - IESG Evaluation-

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#177: Editorial Comments for ami draft - IESG Evaluation-

 Comments by Suresh Krishnan (Comment (2016-05-03))

 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-applicability-ami/ballot/

 Section 1.2: Required reading - Why is the item [surveySG] in required
 reading not part of the normative references?

 Section 1.3: Please expand RPL before first use and add a reference to
 RFC6550

 Section 2: Is this section really required? Seems like a summarization of
 the RPL RFC. At least consider removing the part that starts with  "RPL
 was designed to meet the following application requirements:" and mentions
 a list of requirement RFCs. This list does not seem relevant here and is
 also covered in the RPL spec itself.

 Section 4.1: This does not sound right. Isn't the periodic meter read
 traffic going the other direction? " The traffic generated by the head-end
 server and destined to metering devices is dominated by periodic meter
 reads,"

 Section 7.4.1: Please add a reference the trickle algorithm at first use.
 e.g. "Trickle [RFC6206] was designed to be..."

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 Reporter:                           |      Owner:  draft-ietf-roll-
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     Type:  defect                   |     Status:  new
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Component:  applicability-ami        |    Version:
 Severity:  In WG Last Call          |   Keywords:
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