[Roll] Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-42

Mališa Vučinić via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 09 December 2020 11:44 UTC

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Reviewer: Mališa Vučinić
Review result: Ready

I have previously reviewed -40 version of this document and in my pass over the
diffs between -40 and -42, I did not find new issues. I believe the document is
ready.

One nit below.

Section 4.1.3.: s/Thus, when a node joins to a network will know which value to
use./Thus, when a node joins a network, it knows which value to use.