[Roll] Secdir review of draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-09 (resend)

[Catherine Meadows <[e-mail]>]

I had the draft authors’ email address wrong on my last message, so I am resending it.

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document gives recommendations for the use of RPL in home automation and building control,
that typically provide support such things as climate and lighting control.  I reviewed a much earlier
version of this document, and I think this version is much improved in the way it scopes out the problem
and handles the security implications.  The Security Considerations section in particular is very
thorough.  There are a few improvements I would recommend, however:

Section 4.1.8   Security

You should  give justifications for these choices of parameters as you give justifications for the
other parameters described in this draft.

Section 7.1 Security considerations during initial deployment

New approaches to initial security deployment are being developed in
   [I-D.kumar-dice-dtls-relay] and
   [I-D.richardson-6tisch--security-6top].  They assume a partial
   ordering of the nodes, such that unsecured nodes are added
   sequentially with the restriction that a path between two secured
   nodes exists which passes through secured nodes only.

I found this a little hard to understand.  When does a node pass from being unsecured to secured?  Or does an unsecured node remain unsecured? If there is
a succinct way of saying this, it could go here.  Since this is only describing new approaches that could potentially be applied, you would not
want to go into a lot of detail. 

In the home, nodes can be visually inspected by the home owner
   and simple measures like pushing buttons simultaneously on joint and
   joining devices is probably sufficient.

I think this definitely needs to be clarified!  You need to say what is being accomplished by pushing the buttons (device pairing)?

7.2

When nodes are lost, no additional security measures are needed, the
   network remains secure as before by not allowing the addition of new
   nodes.

I’m not sure what this means.  Does it mean that if a node is lost, then it is treated as a “new node” if it reappears, and is not allowed
to rejoin the network?

New nodes can be added by using the same protocols used for
   initial deployment.

This came right after the sentence beginning “When nodes are lost” which said that new nodes are not added.  That contradiction needs to
be reconciled.  I’m also not sure what “using the same protocol” means.  Does it mean rerunning the protocol and rekeying all the nodes, or does
it mean using the features that protocol has for adding nodes?


Nits:

Section 1.1 

This applicability statement
   recommends more light weight security solutions and specify the
   conditions under which these solutions are appropriate.

Should be “specifies” instead of “specify”.  I’m also not sure what is meant by “conditions under which these solutions are appropriate.”  Do
you mean light-weight as opposed to no security, or light-weight as opposed to heavy-weight.  Or are you talking about conditions
under which different light-weight solutions are appropriate? From reading the rest of the draft, I would assume the last is what you mean.


I consider this document  ready with issues.

Catherine Meadows
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