Re: [Roll] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-12: (with COMMENT)

Rahul Arvind Jadhav <rahul.jadhav@huawei.com> Sat, 29 June 2019 03:50 UTC

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From: Rahul Arvind Jadhav <rahul.jadhav@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-12: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you Eric for the review.

Barry gave us an updated abstract text which not only reads well but also fixes the comment you made. DCO will be mentioned in the abstract.

Thanks,
Rahul

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COMMENT:
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Thank you all for the work put into this clear and well-written document. I have only one COMMENT:  DCO should be mentioned in the abstract as the document goes beyond a problem description (as currently described in the abstract).