Re: [Roll] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-13: (with COMMENT)

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Tue, 08 September 2020 07:31 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Many thanks Eric and (again) Carles:


> 
> Thank you for the work put into this document.
> 
> Carles Gomez has done a Last Call IoT directorate review at
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/iot-
> directorate/_UG_q8yutQU28ldYK1cdySTQoNs
> and had a couple of nits and comments that were discussed and implemented.
> Thank you Carles for the review and thank you Pascal for updating the
> document accordingly.

: )

> I find this text confusing at first read "adding nodes that do not support
> [RFC8138] after a roll back may be problematic if the roll back did not fully
> complete" I had to read section 5.3 to fully understand it.
> 
> Should something like ", the network operator must ensure that the roll back
> operation is completed before adding nodes that do not support RFC 8138" be
> easier to understand ?
> 

Looks good, I'll make the change. Should we uppercase the must?

Take care,

Pascal