[Roll] [roll] #168 (admin-local-policy): Editorial comments

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#168: Editorial comments

 From: Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
 Date: 2014-12-16 0:59 GMT+02:00

     I believe that MPL In the title should be expanded.  It should also be
 expanded upon first use within the document.

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 Reporter:                           |      Owner:  draft-ietf-roll-admin-
  mariainesrobles@gmail.com          |  local-policy@tools.ietf.org
     Type:  defect                   |     Status:  new
 Priority:  minor                    |  Milestone:
Component:  admin-local-policy       |    Version:
 Severity:  In WG Last Call          |   Keywords:  Request to expand MPL
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/roll/trac/ticket/168>
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