Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-03.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Mon, 12 May 2014 19:53 UTC

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This applies to many documents, including some of mine:

internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    > Title           : Applicability Statement: The use of the RPL protocol
    > set in Home Automation and Building Control

May I suggest that since the P in "RPL" is "Protocol", that you change this
to:
        "The use of RPL in Home Automation and Building Control"

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IETF ROLL WG co-chair.    http://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/roll/charter/