Re: [Roll] updates to draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-03.txt
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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Routing Over Low power and Lossy networks <roll@ietf.org>
CC: Rahul Arvind Jadhav <rahul.jadhav@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [Roll] updates to draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-03.txt
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Many thanks Michael! I reviewed the changes and they look good to me. For next time the typo of double “the the” could be removed. I learned some grammar on the way with the sentence starting with “ Such as a malicious node...” but that’s understandable... Take care, Pascal > Le 28 sept. 2020 à 20:59, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> a écrit : > > >> Title : Controlling Secure Network Enrollment in RPL networks >> Authors : Michael Richardson >> Rahul Arvind Jadhav >> ... >> >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-03 > > I followed up on https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/roll/hX5nKvkdLF4Ygw_qniPJ4Kg0zI8/ > on the thread from April. > > I have added Rahul to the author list as agreed last April. > I have made sure that all cases of "join" -> enroll, except for *Join Proxy*, > which is defined in 6tisch-minimal-security. > > -- > Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) > Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide > _______________________________________________ > Roll mailing list > Roll@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/roll
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