[Roll] roll-applicability-template-00

peter van der Stok <stokcons@xs4all.nl> Wed, 03 April 2013 10:14 UTC

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Hi Michael,

Downloading the applicability template (pdf), I discovered a funny 
table of contents
sections 2.1 and 2.2 have the same title: Network Topologies,
section 2.2.1 is called Traffic characteristics; I assume this should 
be the section 2.2 title.

By the way is the title "N-cast" for section 2.2.7.not sufficient 
instead of "duocast and N-cast" ?

Greetings,

peter

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