Re: [Roll] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with COMMENT)

Yusuke DOI <yusuke.doi@toshiba.co.jp> Wed, 08 July 2015 23:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-mpl-parameter-configuration-06: (with COMMENT)
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Ben,

Thank you for the review!

On 2015-07-08 11:35, Ben Campbell wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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>
> -- section 2.6, 1st sentence :" A parameter set for an MPL domain SHOULD
> NOT be updated more often
>     than twice of Information Refresh Time"
>
> The preposition "of" is incorrect. Normally I would say leave that for
> the RFC editor, but it's not clear to me if this means "twice the
> information refresh time" or "twice during an information refresh time
> (interval)". (I assume the former, but it could be more clear.)

Yes, the former is what I intended to ease unbalanced MPL domain due to 
use of different parameter set for nodes.

Yusuke