Re: [Roll] Review of draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-04

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Fri, 06 August 2021 11:02 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Review of draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-04
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Dear Konrad

Many fair points below. Many thanks for is a very useful review.

Please see below

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roll <roll-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Konrad Iwanicki
> Subject: [Roll] Review of draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-04
> 
> Dear authors,
> 
> This is the first review I am doing for IETF's draft, so any suggestions
> on how I could improve the quality of my future reviews are welcome.
> 
> I have the following major issues with the draft. Perhaps some of them
> have been covered during some meetings (sorry for missing those); my
> comments are based just on what I got from the draft (and the related
> drafts).


This is indeed very helpful, Konrad. With this quality of comments, the more the merrier. 

And as it goes, the ROLL interims are usually at very palatable times for people in central Europe. 
You're free and would be very welcome to join, no need to register to anything though we like to see the real names of attendees for the records.

For the rest, I'll react from Rahul's reply.

Keep safe!

Pascal