Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-09.txt
Konrad Iwanicki <iwanicki@mimuw.edu.pl> Fri, 19 May 2023 08:29 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-09.txt
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Hi all, On 18/05/2023 20:03, Michael Richardson wrote: > Konrad Iwanicki <iwanicki@mimuw.edu.pl> wrote: > > Should I go once more over the draft? > > Sure, I need to do a top-to-bottom read-through myself. I went through the entire draft a few times. It is definitely much clearer now. I did some more editing, though (mostly clarifications/reordering and minor copy-editing): https://github.com/roll-wg/draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority/pull/16 Best, -- - Konrad Iwanicki.
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- Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment… Konrad Iwanicki
- Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment… Konrad Iwanicki
- Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment… Michael Richardson
- Re: [Roll] I-D Action: draft-ietf-roll-enrollment… Konrad Iwanicki
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