Re: [Roll] ID Tracker State Update Notice: <draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-07.txt>

[Yvonne-Anne Pignolet <[e-mail]>]

Dear all

I updated the shepherd write-up accordingly.

Best Regards
Yvonne-Anne

On 4 March 2015 at 22:41, IETF Secretariat <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> IESG state changed to AD Evaluation::Revised I-D Needed from AD Evaluation
> AD review
> =====
>
> Thanks for this really nice document. I found it an easy read.
>
> I have done my usual AD review to catch issues before IETF last call and
> IESG evaluation.
>
> I only have a handful of small issues, but I think it would be worth
> resolving them with a new revision before we go to last call. I have
> marked the datatracker to show "Revised I-D needed" and I'll wait to
> see you post a new version.
>
> Thanks for the work,
> Adrian
>
> ===
>
> The chairs and I have discussed moving this document onto the Standards
> Track in accordance with the description of an Applicability Statement in
> Section 32 of RFC 2026. The only thing you need to do is update the
> "Intended status" to say "Proposed Standard".
>
> The Shepherd will also need to update the write-up and flip the field in
> the datatracker.
>
> ---
>
> In 1.1. you have
>
>    The ROLL working group has specified a set of routing protocols for
>    Lossy and Low- resource Networks (LLN) [RFC6550]
>
> Yet 6550 defines
>
>    Low-Power and Lossy Networks (LLNs)
>
> ---
>
> Section 1.2 seems to only be necessary for a use of "MUST" in section
> 7. I am comfortable with you having used normal case ("must", "should",
> "recommended") in the text. Could Section 7 also drop this to "must"
> and then you could remove Section 1.2?
>
> ---
>
> 2.2.7 mentions AODV without expanding the abbreviation and without a
> reference.
>
> ---
>
> A few abbreviations need to be expanded on first use:
> DIO
> DAG
> MPL
> DAO
> RA
> ULA
> DODAG
> ETX
>
> ---
>
> 4.1.7 has...
>
>    Repetition of the message can be inhibited by a small
>    value of k.
>
> I think this is lacking a little context. What is k?
>
> ---
>
> Please mark Section 11 "To be deleted by the RFC Editor before
> publication."
> ID Tracker URL:
> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building/
>
>