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[Chair hat on]

No need to bikeshed: Just soften the sentence to say "in the last few 
months of 2019" or something like that. Purely editorial.

pr

On 12 Jul 2024, at 10:07, Paul Hoffman wrote:

> On Jul 12, 2024, at 09:04, Jay Daley <exec-director@ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>>> On 12 Jul 2024, at 16:15, Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@icann.org> 
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> 3) Section 1.3 (not related to terminology)
>>>>
>>>> Current:
>>>>  The first RFC to be published following the guidance of the group 
>>>> of
>>>>  RFCs described in [RFC7990] was [RFC8650], published in November
>>>>  2019.
>>>>
>>>> Suggested (because the first RFC published was RFC 8651):
>>>> The first RFC (by date order) to be published following the the 
>>>> guidance of the group of
>>>> RFCs described in [RFC7990] was [RFC8651], published in October 
>>>> 2019.
>>>>
>>>> Or:
>>>> The first RFC (by RFC number order) to be published following the 
>>>> the guidance of the group of
>>>> RFCs described in [RFC7990] was [RFC8650], published in November 
>>>> 2019.
>>>
>>> Ouch. I (Paul) carefully checked this, but obviously did so 
>>> incorrectly. We'll go with the first version (8651).
>>
>> This might seem trivial, but I think it’s better to go with RFC 
>> number order, not date order, and therefore RFC 8650.  The reasoning 
>> is because it’s more important to tell people at what point in the 
>> series the formats change, not precisely when the change happened.
>
> It looks like there were many other RFCs using the new format 
> published in October before RFC 8650.
>
> If the WG wants to go down this bikeshedding path, I would prefer just 
> to remove the reference altogether so we can focus on more important 
> discussions.
>
> --Paul Hoffman

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<p dir=3D"auto">[Chair hat on]</p>
<p dir=3D"auto">No need to bikeshed: Just soften the sentence to say &quo=
t;in the last few months of 2019&quot; or something like that. Purely edi=
torial.</p>
<p dir=3D"auto">pr</p>
<p dir=3D"auto">On 12 Jul 2024, at 10:07, Paul Hoffman wrote:</p>
<blockquote style=3D"margin: 0 0 5px; padding-left: 5px; border-left: 2px=
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<p dir=3D"auto">On Jul 12, 2024, at 09:04, Jay Daley <a href=3D"mailto:ex=
ec-director@ietf.org" style=3D"color: #777777;">exec-director@ietf.org</a=
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<p dir=3D"auto">On 12 Jul 2024, at 16:15, Paul Hoffman <a href=3D"mailto:=
paul.hoffman@icann.org" style=3D"color: #BBBBBB;">paul.hoffman@icann.org<=
/a> wrote:</p>
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<ol start=3D"3">
<li>Section 1.3 (not related to terminology)</li>
</ol>
<p dir=3D"auto">Current:<br>
The first RFC to be published following the guidance of the group of<br>
RFCs described in [RFC7990] was [RFC8650], published in November<br>
2019.</p>
<p dir=3D"auto">Suggested (because the first RFC published was RFC 8651):=
<br>
The first RFC (by date order) to be published following the the guidance =
of the group of<br>
RFCs described in [RFC7990] was [RFC8651], published in October 2019.</p>=

<p dir=3D"auto">Or:<br>
The first RFC (by RFC number order) to be published following the the gui=
dance of the group of<br>
RFCs described in [RFC7990] was [RFC8650], published in November 2019.</p=
>
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<p dir=3D"auto">Ouch. I (Paul) carefully checked this, but obviously did =
so incorrectly. We'll go with the first version (8651).</p>
</blockquote>
<p dir=3D"auto">This might seem trivial, but I think it=E2=80=99s better =
to go with RFC number order, not date order, and therefore RFC 8650.  The=
 reasoning is because it=E2=80=99s more important to tell people at what =
point in the series the formats change, not precisely when the change hap=
pened.</p>
</blockquote>
<p dir=3D"auto">It looks like there were many other RFCs using the new fo=
rmat published in October before RFC 8650.</p>
<p dir=3D"auto">If the WG wants to go down this bikeshedding path, I woul=
d prefer just to remove the reference altogether so we can focus on more =
important discussions.</p>
<p dir=3D"auto">--Paul Hoffman</p>
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