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([2601:647:4600:3f31:e07d:f33e:2143:e1f5]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id h3sm591814pgv.38.2019.03.05.20.43.51 (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Tue, 05 Mar 2019 20:43:52 -0800 (PST) From: Nils Ohlmeier Message-Id: <17370418-5B43-43E2-A96B-CF03E627BE0F@mozilla.com> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_66A3443F-672B-479C-95BE-A848F9D27EFA" Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 12.2 \(3445.102.3\)) Date: Tue, 5 Mar 2019 20:43:50 -0800 In-Reply-To: To: RTCWeb IETF References: X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3445.102.3) Archived-At: Subject: Re: [rtcweb] Call for review X-BeenThere: rtcweb@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers working group list List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 06 Mar 2019 04:43:59 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_66A3443F-672B-479C-95BE-A848F9D27EFA Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 I have reviewed draft-uberti-ip-handling-ex-mdns and in general it = looks. One part is not clear enough to me though:=20 - section 3.1 uses the term =E2=80=9Cpreferred interface=E2=80=9D for = first time (I did not find this term in draft-rtcweb-ip-handling) and = it=E2=80=99s not clear to me what it means. - section 3.2 does not use the term interfaces at all, but instead talks = about IP addresses instead. I=E2=80=99m guessing section 3.2 implicitly refers to all IP addresses = from all interface. It would help to make that explicit. Since =E2=80=9Cpreferred interface=E2=80=9D seems to be used first in = the draft I think needs to be defined somewhere. Alternatively the term =E2=80=9Cpreferred interface=E2=80=9D in section = 3.1 could get replaced with terms referring to IP addresses. Best regards Nils Ohlmeier > On 5Mar, 2019, at 12:22, Ted Hardie wrote: >=20 > Howdy, >=20 > draft-uberti-ip-handling-ex- = mdns = is = a very short draft describing two new modes related to = draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling = using bits = of draft-ietf-rtcweb-mdns-ice-candidates = .= >=20 > The chairs would like to ask for a couple of reviews; given that it is = four pages long, we are hopeful that it will not take much time. >=20 > Please send your review to the list, >=20 > thanks, >=20 > Ted > _______________________________________________ > rtcweb mailing list > rtcweb@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtcweb --Apple-Mail=_66A3443F-672B-479C-95BE-A848F9D27EFA Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 I = have reviewed draft-uberti-ip-handling-ex-mdns and in general it = looks.

One part is = not clear enough to me though: 
- section 3.1 = uses the term =E2=80=9Cpreferred interface=E2=80=9D for first time (I = did not find this term in draft-rtcweb-ip-handling) and it=E2=80=99s not = clear to me what it means.
- section 3.2 does not = use the term interfaces at all, but instead talks about IP addresses = instead.

I=E2=80= =99m guessing section 3.2 implicitly refers to all IP addresses from all = interface. It would help to make that explicit.
Since= =E2=80=9Cpreferred interface=E2=80=9D seems to be used first in the = draft I think needs to be defined somewhere.
Alternatively the term =E2=80=9Cpreferred interface=E2=80=9D = in section 3.1 could get replaced with terms referring to IP = addresses.

Best = regards
  Nils Ohlmeier

On 5Mar, = 2019, at 12:22, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

Howdy,

draft-uberti-ip-handling-ex-mdns is a very short draft describing two new = modes  related to draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling using bits of draft-ietf-rtcweb-mdns-ice-candidates.

The chairs would like to = ask for a couple of reviews; given that it is four pages long, we are = hopeful that it will not take much time.

Please send your review to the = list,

thanks,

Ted
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