[rtcweb] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling-11
Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com> Sun, 17 February 2019 17:55 UTC
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Subject: [rtcweb] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling-11
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Reviewer: Joseph Touch Review result: Ready This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review. This document has no significant transport issues. As a very minor issue, the document refers to the use of UDP "connect": Once a suitable remote IP has been determined, the implementation can create a UDP socket, bind it to the appropriate wildcard address, and tell it to connect to the remote IP. Generally, this results in the socket being assigned a local address based on the kernel routing table, without sending any packets over the network. It might be useful to be more clear that this is an OS command (not a protocol one). If the particular semantics of this command are relevant, that should be noted as well.
- [rtcweb] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-rt… Joseph Touch
- Re: [rtcweb] Tsvart last call review of draft-iet… Justin Uberti
- Re: [rtcweb] [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of… Joe Touch
- Re: [rtcweb] [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of… Justin Uberti