Re: [rtcweb] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-05.txt

The start of Section 3 of draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-05.txt says: "By its name,
FEC describes ...."

The words 'By its name' are not needed. I suggest they be removed.

Barry Dingle
Melbourne, Australia

On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 9:59 AM, Justin Uberti <juberti@google.com> wrote:

> Note that is simply a version bump for freshness.
>
> On Tue, May 23, 2017 at 10:38 PM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers
>> of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : WebRTC Forward Error Correction Requirements
>>         Author          : Justin Uberti
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-05.txt
>>         Pages           : 10
>>         Date            : 2017-05-23
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document provides information and requirements for how Forward
>>    Error Correction (FEC) should be used by WebRTC applications.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-05
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-05
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-05
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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