Re: [rtcweb] OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent-freshness-13

"Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy)" <tireddy@cisco.com> Thu, 28 May 2015 10:54 UTC

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From: "Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy)" <tireddy@cisco.com>
To: Harald Alvestrand <harald@alvestrand.no>, "rtcweb@ietf.org" <rtcweb@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [rtcweb] OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent-freshness-13
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: rtcweb [mailto:rtcweb-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Harald
> Alvestrand
> Sent: Thursday, May 28, 2015 4:20 PM
> To: rtcweb@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [rtcweb] OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-stun-consent-
> freshness-13
> 
> Den 28. mai 2015 08:32, skrev Tirumaleswar Reddy (tireddy):
> >> > Please add a sentence to summarize ICE-lite, not just the reference.
> > NEW:
> > ICE-lite agent defined in section 2.7 of [RFC5245] does not generate
> connectivity
> >    checks or runs the ICE state machine, it only needs to be able to
> >    respond to connectivity checks.  Hence an ICE-lite implementation
> >    will not generate consent checks, but will just respond to consent
> >    checks it receives.  No changes are required to ICE-lite
> >    implementations in order to respond to consent checks, as they are
> >    processed as normal ICE connectivity checks.
> >
> >> >
> 
> Grammar stickler:
> 
> "An ICE-lite agent, as defined in section 2.7 of [RFC5245], does not
> generate connectivity check or run the ICE state machine".
> 
> .... "Hence an ICE-lite agent will not ..."
> 
> I think the second occurence of "implementation" is OK, but the first
> one really needs to be "agent".

Thanks, fixed in my local copy.

-Tiru
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