[rtcweb] Alissa Cooper's Yes on draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-18: (with COMMENT)

Datatracker on behalf of Alissa Cooper <ietf-secretariat-reply@ietf.org> Wed, 06 March 2019 15:40 UTC

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Subject: [rtcweb] Alissa Cooper's Yes on draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-18: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch-18: Yes

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In Section 7 I would suggest using Alice and Bob (or some other name) rather
than "I" and "you/your." alice@example.org is used there so the pronouns are
mixed.

Same comment for 9.1 -- I would suggest replacing "your" with "the user's."

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