Re: [rtcweb] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04.txt

Data Channel Establishment Protocol *Editorials* -

Section 4 - 2nd paragraph -

Change

"The set of consistent properties includes "   to the following

"The set of consistent properties includes : "

Section 4 - 3rd para (after the 6 dot points), 2nd sentence reads as
follows -

"The side wanting to open a data channel selects an SCTP stream
identifier for which the
   corresponding incoming and outgoing SCTP stream is unused and sends a
   DATA_CHANNEL_OPEN message on this outgoing SCTP stream. "

This is confusing. I suggest it be simplified to -

"The side wanting to open a data channel selects an unused SCTP stream
identifier   and sends a
   DATA_CHANNEL_OPEN message on this outgoing SCTP stream. "

Cheers,
/Barry Dingle
Australia

On Wed, Apr 9, 2014 at 8:03 PM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers
> Working Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : WebRTC Data Channel Establishment Protocol
>         Authors         : Randell Jesup
>                           Salvatore Loreto
>                           Michael Tuexen
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-04.txt
>         Pages           : 12
>         Date            : 2014-04-09
>
> Abstract:
>    The Web Real-Time Communication (WebRTC) working group is charged to
>    provide protocols to support for direct interactive rich
>    communication using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-
>    browsers.  This document specifies a simple protocol for establishing
>    symmetric data channels between the peers.  It uses a two way
>    handshake and allows sending of user data without waiting for the
>    handshake to complete.
>
>
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol/
>
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