Re: Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited (ending 16 August, 2020)

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org>, "rtg-bfd@ietf.org" <rtg-bfd@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited (ending 16 August, 2020)
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Note that I also reviewed the YANG model for the extensions and don't have any issues. I was a little surprised to see two features but I can't see a better way to support global configuration AND/OR interface configuration. 

On 8/4/20, 10:09 AM, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> wrote:

    I've read the document (more than once) and support publication. It is a very simple BFD extension that simplifies deployment for the use cases enumerated in the "Introduction". 

    I have one editorial comments: 

        Can you use phasing other than "initiates BFD control packets"? Perhaps, "initiates a new BFD session" or "begins sending BFD control packets"? 

    Thanks,
    Acee 

    On 8/4/20, 9:10 AM, "Rtg-bfd on behalf of Jeffrey Haas" <rtg-bfd-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of jhaas@pfrc.org> wrote:

        Working Group,

        https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited/

        With apologies to the authors of BFD unsolicited, this document is past due
        for Working Group Last Call.  The primary holdup on the document had been
        last minute interaction with the RFC Editor with regard to its impact on the
        BFD Yang model.  That work had completed some time ago.  (The Yang model,
        however, is still lingering in MISREF state.)

        This begins a last call period ending on 16 August.

        Please send your comments to the mailing list whether you think this work is
        ready to advance to the IESG or not.

        -- Jeff & Reshad