Re: draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan nits

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Wed, 26 December 2018 17:32 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Dec 2018 09:31:50 -0800
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Subject: Re: draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan nits
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Hi Jeff,
my apologies for these errors. Will fix them all today.

Regards,
Greg

On Wed, Dec 26, 2018, 09:20 Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org wrote:

> As part of doing my shepherd review for BFD for VXLAN, I noted three
> details that should be attended to prior to the document being submitted to
> the IESG:
> There is a missing IPR attestation from Sudarsan.  I have unicasted him to
> request this to be done.
> In the document:
>
>    IANA has assigned TBA as a dedicated MAC address from the IANA 8-bit
>    unicast MAC address registry to be used as the Destination MAC
>    address of the inner Ethernet of VXLAN when carrying BFD control
>    packets.
>
> I believe this is intended to be 48-bit, not 8-bit?
>
>    Authors would like to thank Jeff Hass of Juniper Networks for his
>    reviews and feedback on this material.
>
> It'd be nice to get the typo in my name corrected. :-)
>
> -- Jeff