Re: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Mon, 14 May 2018 23:09 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 14 May 2018 16:09:38 -0700
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Subject: Re: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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Hi Michael,
thank you for the most expedient response. Both updates are in the new
working version.

Regards,
Greg

On Mon, May 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
wrote:

>
> Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> wrote:
>     > The text that follows the first sentence in section 4.13.1 is the
>     > replacement of the entire section 6.8.6 of RFC 5880. Would stressing
> that
>     > make the relationship more clear, e.g.:
>
>     txt> The following procedure replaces the entire section 6.8.6 of
> [RFC5880].
>
>     > And the same can be applied to the first sentence in section 14.3.3:
>
>     txt> The following procedure replaces the entire section 6.8.7 of
> [RFC5880].
>
> That seems like good text.
>
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