Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-bfd-yang-13.txt> (YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)) to Proposed Standard

["Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Thanks for the review. I will add the missing reference statements, I believe this was just an oversight because there are/were no RFC numbers for these imported modules (there is now for ietf-routing).  So I will add the usual RFC XXX with a note for the RFC Editor.

Regards,
Reshad.


On 2018-05-26, 7:31 AM, "tom p." <[e-mail]> wrote:

    This I-D has a number of import statements from other YANG modules for
    which there is no Reference statement where I believe that there should
    be, statements such as .
    
      import iana-bfd-types
      import ietf-bfd
      import ietf-bfd-mpls
      import ietf-te
      import ietf-routing
    
    In the first three cases, it may be that the editors of this I-D
    consider that such a reference is not needed because the relevant
    modules are in the same I-D but such thinking is erroneous.  These are
    separate modules which will lead independent existences in the wild so
    that there will be nothing to tell a user of e.g.  module
    ietf-bfd-mpls-te
    where to look for
    ietf-bfd-types, ietf-bfd,  ietf-bfd-mpls
    
    These need  reference statement such as
    
      reference "RFC XXXX:   YANG Data Model for BFD";
    
    Tom Petch
    
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    > The IESG has received a request from the Bidirectional Forwarding
    Detection
    > WG (bfd) to consider the following document: - 'YANG Data Model for
    > Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)'
    >   <draft-ietf-bfd-yang-13.txt> as Proposed Standard
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    > Abstract
    >
    >
    >    This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
    configure
    >    and manage Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD).
    >
    >    The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management
    >    Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
    >
    >
    >
    >
    > The file can be obtained via
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-yang/
    >
    > IESG discussion can be tracked via
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-yang/ballot/
    >
    >
    > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
    >
    >
    > The document contains these normative downward references.
    > See RFC 3967 for additional information:
    >     draft-ietf-teas-yang-te: A YANG Data Model for Traffic Engineering
    Tunnels and Interfaces (None - IETF stream)
    >     draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang: A YANG Data Model for MPLS Base (None -
    IETF stream)
    >
    >
    >