Re: FW: New Version Notification for draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt

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Subject: Re: FW: New Version Notification for draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
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On 30/03/2023 15:09, Rajaguru Veluchamy (rvelucha) wrote:
> HI Team,
>
> Can we have WG adoption for this draft please.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang/

Since it imports RFC8349, that must be a Normative Reference in the7950 I-D.

There is a template for Security Considerations in the YANG Guidelines 
RFC which there needs to be a good reason not to follow. Those 
guidelines drag in some more references.

A YANG module does not exist until it is registered via IANA so the IANA 
Considerations need supplying, registering the three modules, registered 
the three name spaces.

YANG would benefit from a reference, RFC7950, in the Introduction.

The WG Web URL are out of date as are the trust URL.

The BSD License reference is out of date.  (In fact, that reference was 
never valid in the first place:-(

RFC9127 gives some ideas of what is wanted.

Tom Petch



>
> Regards
> V.Rajaguru
> XR/BFD/PI
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> -----Original Message-----
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> Sent: Thursday, March 30, 2023 7:36 PM
> To: Rajaguru Veluchamy (rvelucha) <rvelucha@cisco.com>; Rajaguru Veluchamy (rvelucha) <rvelucha@cisco.com>
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
> has been successfully submitted by RAJAGURU VELUCHAMY and posted to the IETF repository.
>
> Name:           draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang
> Revision:       05
> Title:          YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) Hardware Offloaded Session
> Document date:  2023-03-30
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          10
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang/
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang
> Diff:           https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05
>
> Abstract:
>     This document defines a extension YANG data model that can be used to
>     manage Hardware Offloaded Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD).
>
>     This document specially talks about BFD sessions that are offloaded
>     to hardware.
>
>     The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management
>     Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
>
>
>
>
> The IETF Secretariat
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