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Re: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: (with COMMENT)

"Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com> Wed, 04 July 2018 03:21 UTC

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From: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>
To: Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-bfd-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bfd-yang@ietf.org>, Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org>, "bfd-chairs@ietf.org" <bfd-chairs@ietf.org>, "rtg-bfd@ietf.org" <rtg-bfd@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: (with COMMENT)
Thread-Topic: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: (with COMMENT)
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Date: Wed, 04 Jul 2018 03:21:41 +0000
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Hi,

Thanks for the review. I will address this in the next rev.

Regards,
Reshad.


On 2018-07-03, 6:42 PM, "Adam Roach" <adam@nostrum.com> wrote:

    Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: No Objection
    
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    I have found one minor editorial issue on page 43:
    
    >    notification singlehop-notification {
    >      description
    >        "Notification for BFD single-hop session state change. An " +
    >        "implementation may rate-limit notifications, e.g. when a" +
    >        "session is continuously changing state.";
    
    Nit: add a space between "a" and the closing quotation mark.
    
    (Note: this occurs on Pages 46, 50, 54, and 57 as well)

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