draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan nits

Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org> Wed, 26 December 2018 17:20 UTC

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As part of doing my shepherd review for BFD for VXLAN, I noted three details that should be attended to prior to the document being submitted to the IESG:
There is a missing IPR attestation from Sudarsan.  I have unicasted him to request this to be done.
In the document:

   IANA has assigned TBA as a dedicated MAC address from the IANA 8-bit
   unicast MAC address registry to be used as the Destination MAC
   address of the inner Ethernet of VXLAN when carrying BFD control
   packets.

I believe this is intended to be 48-bit, not 8-bit?

   Authors would like to thank Jeff Hass of Juniper Networks for his
   reviews and feedback on this material.

It'd be nice to get the typo in my name corrected. :-)

-- Jeff