Re: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: (with COMMENT)

[Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>]

Hi Alexey,
thank you for the review and your kind words.

Will change to "can" and publish in the next version.

Regards,
Greg

On Sat, Jun 30, 2018 at 8:16 AM, Alexey Melnikov <[e-mail]>
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> draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: No Objection
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> This is a very readable document, so thank you for that. One small nit:
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> In Section 5.6, last sentence of the first paragraph says:
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>    All other information MAY be   determined dynamically.
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> This is not correct use of RFC 2119 MAY, because it doesn't look like an
> implementation choice. I suggest you change it to lowercase "may" or "can".
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