Re: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: (with COMMENT)

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Sat, 30 June 2018 18:18 UTC

Return-Path: <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: rtg-bfd@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: rtg-bfd@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 80B7F130DC9; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:14 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.998
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.998 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 4j9rck_xT_CO; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:12 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-lj1-x244.google.com (mail-lj1-x244.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::244]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6D663130DE1; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:09 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-lj1-x244.google.com with SMTP id u6-v6so9669304lju.13; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:09 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=gftiJHZY75CrasRTw/H5LakqSLjrmd5D+uB1lu1dgpE=; b=vRwojjIMS3b3OCVFFSI5CKVoQ05u1CxGyiM4jAjUBaJNODwSGdlCvB3SkG/sAeC0rJ J7oHvnY6gR0l9fY3OQlJWVQsambVlcrP0GTCIPxxIBuHM9JxFEz4siAhN4v+X3gjCj4Y c4o2MC+u5mnW8qe2L4tL/WLAH+3yFCPah+hSHCJ5CfX9uwu/WnHZZj8N7n5ecvpRjTl3 GneJH3mKHOIcj7yGwDEQwo2nedlM4XKYz8PyELzXl5cAgAqoqAhPF4Vy6pTV4lVK9eRh VRnBd1UaYVBj8EeoZEoO4z809EtBMrLE+l9nQoE5op5blBx4/TxUzZTPYuueA9fZ/Zsd OkBA==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=gftiJHZY75CrasRTw/H5LakqSLjrmd5D+uB1lu1dgpE=; b=C/l87pNGDxX+jqO/UP/M/zO4Cyj8PBJabqRr9G+t1No7HT8Su/zApkG4wCZK3bqqde we4fiWupx4ZxjByE5FTXP+DsM7S8kwlk0FnPQJ4o2Q8Rl5RyGU2vfA7h+CbqFQ+8FuHS uw97FrnDzECcq7wq0h9hjS+t+2IPJyf8LuYRSgY+qxJzifmnZPY9qyyGoEUcMxM6WvFZ zZuCyOeixI9gTpZxzrfJ5/IxVGl9jbUwSb2phJDJUBQL7hgqk4Njj5IVLo3GE9leaie0 4LegvdEzb0f/K+WWTGwdqMk7+bMwhbtHwhuoN8CQsEZmblSamqzCJhh/+w0SkBt8wPtN AliA==
X-Gm-Message-State: APt69E18ZI36/cxr++xaa7C+lxC1zZ/pe7N3UzgWzRcNccKwjatjDXfR C64FPnxvNofEh0LDld4IQuHN0N3qHzIo5pQgKcU=
X-Google-Smtp-Source: AAOMgpf+Lx6Kbath705ykx8FHubOpyEdv12GR99gdkb+zk35TlZ5X/+TUii4/Bm+rz/irDK+F5uwHkQfvXz6ORDABQw=
X-Received: by 2002:a2e:2161:: with SMTP id h94-v6mr13879440ljh.58.1530382687685; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:07 -0700 (PDT)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Received: by 2002:a2e:6e08:0:0:0:0:0 with HTTP; Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:07 -0700 (PDT)
In-Reply-To: <153037181249.26424.1683177097893955126.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
References: <153037181249.26424.1683177097893955126.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2018 11:18:07 -0700
Message-ID: <CA+RyBmWWZ_VtV1P7B8=FRRyeApzcymtAoacZ8=kWNK9CCMTkNA@mail.gmail.com>
Subject: Re: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: (with COMMENT)
To: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint@ietf.org, Reshad Rahman <rrahman@cisco.com>, bfd-chairs@ietf.org, rtg-bfd@ietf.org
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="00000000000078509a056fdffca2"
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-bfd/q7yTtkxKNfo9Ew9EG_eS7hbWm4s>
X-BeenThere: rtg-bfd@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.26
Precedence: list
List-Id: "RTG Area: Bidirectional Forwarding Detection DT" <rtg-bfd.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/rtg-bfd>, <mailto:rtg-bfd-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/rtg-bfd/>
List-Post: <mailto:rtg-bfd@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:rtg-bfd-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtg-bfd>, <mailto:rtg-bfd-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2018 18:18:15 -0000

Hi Alexey,
thank you for the review and your kind words.

Will change to "can" and publish in the next version.

Regards,
Greg

On Sat, Jun 30, 2018 at 8:16 AM, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
wrote:

> Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: No Objection
>
> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> introductory paragraph, however.)
>
>
> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>
>
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint/
>
>
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> This is a very readable document, so thank you for that. One small nit:
>
> In Section 5.6, last sentence of the first paragraph says:
>
>    All other information MAY be   determined dynamically.
>
> This is not correct use of RFC 2119 MAY, because it doesn't look like an
> implementation choice. I suggest you change it to lowercase "may" or "can".
>
>
>