Re: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Tue, 26 May 2020 22:34 UTC

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From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 26 May 2020 15:34:11 -0700
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Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt
To: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>
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Dear Carlos,
thank you for the suggested update. I agree that it improves the text. Will
include in the working version of the draft for now.

Regards,
Greg

On Mon, May 25, 2020 at 6:15 PM Carlos Pignataro (cpignata) <
cpignata@cisco.com> wrote:

> Thank you, Greg.
>
> I only looked at the update to the last paragraph of Section 6.
>
> Reading through the last paragraph of Section 6, the text is not fully
> clear. There are a few nits, including a missing article, /as long as/as
> well as/, /is/are/, and missing preposition which results in an incorrect
> pointer.
>
> I’d suggest, for your consideration:
>
> OLD:
>    Validation of TTL / Hop Limit of the inner IP packet, as long as the
>    related considerations for BFD control packet demultiplexing and
>    authentication, is performed as described in Section 5 [RFC5881].
>
>
> OLD:
>    Validation of the TTL / Hop Limit field of the inner IP packet, as
>    well as the related considerations for BFD control packet
>    demultiplexing and authentication, are performed as described in
>    Section 5 of [RFC5881].
>
> Best,
>
> Carlos.
>
> 2020/05/25 午後6:11、Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>のメールt;のメール:
>
> Dear Carlos,
> thank you for your comments and suggestions. I hope that the updated
> version of the draft addresses your comments. Please let me know whether
> I've captured them all correctly.
>
> Dear Jeff and Reshad,
> I believe that all action points from the IESG reviews and discussions are
> reflected in the current version. I much appreciate your consideration and
> suggestion on the next steps to progress this document.
>
> Regards,
> Greg
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Date: Mon, May 25, 2020 at 3:00 PM
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt
> To: Sudarsan Paragiri <sudarsan.225@gmail.com>om>, Mallik Mudigonda <
> mmudigon@cisco.com>gt;, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>om>, Vengada Prasad
> Govindan <venggovi@cisco.com>om>, Santosh Pallagatti <
> santosh.pallagatti@gmail.com>
>
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Greg Mirsky and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:           draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan
> Revision:       12
> Title:          BFD for VXLAN
> Document date:  2020-05-25
> Group:          bfd
> Pages:          11
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the use of the Bidirectional Forwarding
>    Detection (BFD) protocol in point-to-point Virtual eXtensible Local
>    Area Network (VXLAN) tunnels used to form an overlay network.
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