Re: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16

Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com> Fri, 18 May 2018 12:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16
To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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Greg,

looking back in the doc I found:
       Poll (P)

          Set to 1 if the local system is sending a Poll Sequence or is a
          session of type MultipointHead soliciting the identities of the
          tails, or 0 if not.

This looks to me as not being in line with the rest of the document, 
especially the part on "MultipointHead soliciting the identities of the 
tails".
Am I right in thinking that this anticipates on 
draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail ?

If so, please clarify this in the doc; if not, please correct me.

Thanks
-m

Le 2018-05-15 à 1:09, Greg Mirsky a écrit :
> Hi Michael,
> thank you for the most expedient response. Both updates are in the new 
> working version.
> 
> Regards,
> Greg
> 
> On Mon, May 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM, Michael Richardson 
> <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca <mailto:mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>> wrote:
> 
> 
>     Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>
>     wrote:
>          > The text that follows the first sentence in section 4.13.1 is the
>          > replacement of the entire section 6.8.6 of RFC 5880. Would
>     stressing that
>          > make the relationship more clear, e.g.:
> 
>          txt> The following procedure replaces the entire section 6.8.6
>     of [RFC5880].
> 
>          > And the same can be applied to the first sentence in section
>     14.3.3:
> 
>          txt> The following procedure replaces the entire section 6.8.7
>     of [RFC5880].
> 
>     That seems like good text.
> 
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