[RTG-DIR]Re: RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18
Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 05 November 2024 11:17 UTC
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Date: Tue, 05 Nov 2024 06:17:34 -0500
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Hi Jia, On Thu, Aug 8, 2024 at 12:16 PM Hejia (Jia) <hejia=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > Hello, > > ... > > Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18 > Reviewer: Jia He > Review Date: August 8, 2024 > IETF LC End Date: date-if-known > Intended Status: Standards Track > > Summary: > > This document is basically ready for publication. It is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to support credit window based flow control scheme. Most of the content in the draft is the same as in the draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. The comments to the draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension about the out-of-date references still apply. > > No major issues found. > > No minor issues found. > > Nits: > > 1、 Replace the out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12", and "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09" with the latest versions. OK, we will update references. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com > B.R. > > Jia
- [RTG-DIR]Re: RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-… Donald Eastlake
- [RTG-DIR]Re: RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-… Hejia (Jia)
- [RTG-DIR]RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-mane… Hejia (Jia)