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Michael McBride <michael.mcbride@futurewei.com> Mon, 30 January 2023 22:46 UTC

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From: Michael McBride <michael.mcbride@futurewei.com>
To: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>, "Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal)" <natal=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
CC: Mike McBride <mmcbride7@gmail.com>, Routing Directorate <rtg-dir@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub.all@ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, "lisp@ietf.org" <lisp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub-10
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That makes sense to me. I was incorrectly reading Map-Notifies in the singular.

Thanks,
mike

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From: rtg-dir <rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Acee Lindem
Sent: Monday, January 30, 2023 8:11 AM
To: Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal) <natal=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Cc: Mike McBride <mmcbride7@gmail.com>; Routing Directorate <rtg-dir@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; lisp@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub-10



> On Jan 29, 2023, at 4:44 PM, Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal) <natal=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Mike,
>  Thanks again for your review! We're applying your suggestions, but we have one quick question regarding one of them, please see below.
>  Thanks,
> Alberto
>  From: Mike McBride via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Date: Tuesday, January 24, 2023 at 5:57 AM
> To: rtg-dir@ietf.org <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
> Cc: draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub.all@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org <last-call@ietf.org>, lisp@ietf.org <lisp@ietf.org>
> Subject: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-pubsub-10
> 
> Section 7.1:
> 
> Change this:
>    Since Map-Notifies from the Map-Server to the ITR need to be...
> To this:
>    Since Map-Notifies from the Map-Server to the ITR needs to be...
> [AR] The former seems correct to me, would it be ok to leave it as is?

I agree with Alberto. If you remove the two prepositional phrases, the subject is clearly plural and requires a plural verb. 

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Thanks,
Acee

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