IETF Logo Mail Archive

Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Wed, 27 April 2022 20:44 UTC

Return-Path: <acee@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: rtg-dir@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: rtg-dir@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 963E5C159A39; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 13:44:55 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -9.598
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-9.598 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, SPF_NONE=0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=cisco.com header.b=D4NeEvaN; dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=cisco.onmicrosoft.com header.b=odYkG7ie
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id kZwPvTKY9cj1; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 13:44:51 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from alln-iport-5.cisco.com (alln-iport-5.cisco.com [173.37.142.92]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher DHE-RSA-SEED-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 86D8FC159A33; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 13:44:51 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=1532; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1651092291; x=1652301891; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:references: in-reply-to:content-id:content-transfer-encoding: mime-version; bh=IeNkQDKlyNzp5VPC7aeOrZ+DarqCnlINPbvgQAlIhW8=; b=D4NeEvaNAKRNFIfFRGoeIeDbkK61XTzI/P1euJi0ueNcdI4VC6tfHPTO WVpwrjMWt+QjS12b0He9nUIlFbRcmfCpI7x4YMpWvZ+MWcg0bzdxxizQB LyQwklJGGIDKiTdBaDw9vioeyKbZ33vONFx1jWzmMbOSM4CfxCHh5P9y3 Q=;
X-IPAS-Result: A0AtAQAdqmlimJBdJa1agQmBVYFSVXxaOUOEVINKA4U4hQ+eQoEugSUDVAsBAQENAQFCBAEBhQICFoUDAiU1CA4BAgQBAQEBAwIDAQEBAQEBAwEBBQEBAQIBBwQUAQEBAQEBAQEJFAcGDAUOECeFaA2GQwIBAxIREQwBATcBDwIBCBoCJgICAjAVEAIEAQ0FIoJjgmYDMQGgMwGBPgKKH3qBMYEBgggBAQYEBIUNGII4CYERLIMRhCmHHSccgg2BPByCZz6ERYNWN4IunQBoGIE6ZS+WTapuCoNKmguFeAUug3SMOYZfkUeWYCCmUgIEAgQFAg4BAQaBYgGCE3AVZQGCPlEZD445g1mKXnU7AgYBCgEBAwmONQEB
IronPort-PHdr: A9a23:aiCipRzboHXW+oHXCzPZngc9DxPP8534PQ8Qv5wgjb8GMqGu5I/rM 0GX4/JxxETIUoPW57Mh6aLWvqnsVHZG7cOHt3YPI5BJXgUO3MMRmQFoCcWZCEr9efjtaSFyH MlLWFJ/uX+hNk0AE8flbFqUqXq3vlYv
IronPort-Data: A9a23:xvHaiqovNEbXFRrPQ8juiNthDmheBmLtZRIvgKrLsJaIsI4StFCzt garIBmHaPeOajOkco9xbouzoUoO7ZLXm9FjHFZl+30xRXsXo+PIVI+TRqvS04x+DSFioGZPt Zh2hgzodZhsJpPkjk7xdOCn9xGQ7InQLlbGILas1htZGEk1EE/NtTo5w7Rj2tIy3oDja++wk YqaT/P3aQfNNwFcagr424rbwP+4lK2v0N+wlgVWicFj5DcypVFMZH4sDf3Zw0/Df2VhNrXSq 9AvY12O1jixEx8FUrtJm1tgG6EAaua60QOm0hK6V0U+6/RPjnRa70o1CBYTQWhqiDObhopY8 vti6sXtZSsWIp/1wt1IBnG0EwkmVUFH0KXMLX76usuJwgiWNXDt2P5pSkoxOOX0+M4uXjoIr qNeeWtLN0zf7w616OrTpu1Ej88uIeHgPZgUvTdryjSx4fMOEc6THfyRtYMAtNs2rucfP6/YX c49UmBAXg/GaCBjO00NJKtryY9EgVGmI2EH9zp5v5Ef53PJ5A18zLarN8DaEvSOTN5J202Ro mbu/mnlDFcdLtP34Taf+3yww+7CgS2+XJkIUbqj7vAvmlCNy3YIBVgTWEehoPL/g0q6c9NSN 0JS/TAhxYAo6EPuQtjndxy1vHDCuQQTM/JVGvEm6AySjKDT6A2YLm4DTT9ILtchsacLqScCz FSFmZbiAiZi9e3TQnOG/bDSpjS3UcQIEYMcTQA5Tg0X+oPKmq8c0UuSYvpcDJyM1OSgTFkc3 Au2hCQ5grwSi+sC2KO64U3LjlqQSn7hE1JdCuL/Az7N0+9pWGK2T9fyuASEt56sOK7cHwfe5 CJb8ySLxLpWZaxhghBhVwnk8FuB3feOMDTGjUVoGfHNHBzypibzJOi8DNyCTXqF3+4ecjPvJ UTUow4UtNlYPWChaul8ZIfZ5yUWIUrISISNuhP8N4cmjn1NmOmvp3gGiam4hDqFraTUuftjU ap3iO71ZZrgNYxpzSCtW8AW2qIxyyY1yAv7HM6ml0X8iOrOOyPFFd/p1WdiiMhksstoRy2Ir L5i2zeil32zrcWnOHCMqN5PRbz0BSFmVMmeRzNrmh6re1o6Rz5J5w75yrI6cIsthLVOiurN5 RmAtrxwljLCaYn8AVzSMBhLMeq3Nb4m9C5TFXF8bD6Ahil4Ca7yvfh3X8VsJ9EPqrc8pcOYu tFYIa1s9NwVFGSek9ncBLGgxLFfmOOD2FzeYnL5MGRuF3OiLiSQkuLZksLU3HFmJkKKWQEW+ tVMCiuzrUI/ejlf
IronPort-HdrOrdr: A9a23:/xVdIq2LrGMJyegivEmQfwqjBepxeYIsimQD101hICG9Lfb3qy n+ppsmPEHP5Ar5AEtQ5expOMG7MBfhHQYc2/heAV7QZniYhILOFvAi0WKC+UyuJ8SazI9gPM hbAtBD4bHLfDpHZIPBkXSF+rUbsZm6GcKT9JzjJh5WJGkAAcwBnmRE40SgYzdLrWJ9dP0E/e +nl7N6Tk2bCBIqh6qAdxw4dtmGg+eOuIPtYBYACRJiwhKJlymU5LnzFAXd9gsCUhtUqI1Ssl Ttokjc3OGOovu7whjT2yv49JJNgubszdNFGYilltUVEDPxkQylDb4RGYFq/QpF5d1H2mxa1+ UkkC1QefibLEmhJ11dlCGdnzUIFgxes0MKh2Xo2kcL6vaJOg7SQ/Ax9L6xNCGpsXbJeLpHof 52N6XzjesLMfqIplWP2zCDPSsa5nacsD4sl/UegGdYVpZbYLhNrZYH9EcQC5sYGjnmgbpXWt WGIfusrMq+S2nqJEwxf1Mft+CETzA2BFOLU0ICssua33xfm2141VIRwIgakm0b/JwwRpFY76 CcW54Y2I1mX4sTd+ZwFe0BScy4BijERg/NKnubJRDiGLscM3zAppbr6PE+5f2sepYP0Jwu8a 6xHW9wpCo3YQbjGMeO1JpE/lTER3i8Ry3kzoVE651wqtTHNfPW2O24OSYTeueb0oAi65fgKo SO0bptcoveEVc=
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.90,294,1643673600"; d="scan'208";a="868613840"
Received: from rcdn-core-8.cisco.com ([173.37.93.144]) by alln-iport-5.cisco.com with ESMTP/TLS/DHE-RSA-SEED-SHA; 27 Apr 2022 20:44:50 +0000
Received: from mail.cisco.com (xfe-aln-004.cisco.com [173.37.135.124]) by rcdn-core-8.cisco.com (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTPS id 23RKiomc019205 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=OK); Wed, 27 Apr 2022 20:44:50 GMT
Received: from xfe-rtp-004.cisco.com (64.101.210.234) by xfe-aln-004.cisco.com (173.37.135.124) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.2.986.14; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 15:44:49 -0500
Received: from NAM11-BN8-obe.outbound.protection.outlook.com (64.101.32.56) by xfe-rtp-004.cisco.com (64.101.210.234) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.2.986.14 via Frontend Transport; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 16:44:49 -0400
ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; s=arcselector9901; d=microsoft.com; cv=none; b=KRqUXq6uQ3b/il8FjwB0NVulblwz970LKNR6yQY9oGa2N6ml2HYWl0IUDHHDnrc/P5BG3zIvnp73GBxYRTii79CxS7XPJL53IXaVOIm8LgTAJ2cxHqlnGVwXt2lLFAVr6K4Nv6kv3I2iqwIQvPhm0U+l4on4W2V+ZloJzLjA9zcLdXxY9k0fRA/6GFBUX9ctzzSDJQAgfFDY0/v7HpzZ8Xi5mG/SzeKOmHcAKVNYUgera9PZO4VoMrNGRiaOPaaKYTZxhhMvimIAmjuR9Fb8xNny9Vy4ubg5RshVxRaDcDYjX/7zd3WUVj1sxW4Zu35PKvaQRBT9G75O1c+3Gr2tDg==
ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=microsoft.com; s=arcselector9901; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-ChunkCount:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-0:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-1; bh=IeNkQDKlyNzp5VPC7aeOrZ+DarqCnlINPbvgQAlIhW8=; b=ZfUfE1DkJaemXbuRr20O0RjyoQK/OsbLu0HNaTCnWPBs71383MEhlmNGd74Q69/5mKsAtYEFkZR7YtEYh8uYH7TofVj76YC0rGtTE8CVGrovNom40O0NoxWsB6r3L2Q3sriD3S5NuRDgwDcefAV0OUXblqfsry5W/zIGwO7Voy3CncYs5Y9XJDR8oUYMGyRpqcXKwIgLc/iiAyhkLPNvriBUD6kaCvnxAmQHCzDi5fy6tgz2iZXfxxoSySb2ovfXPkkwezIqUJToKeaAHMIZcF9XCosTzFG6JbvB62Gpx0ZF4OG27iB8jo4pZQGBYw3FN9Go+zz5RCjXYiPydGlewg==
ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx.microsoft.com 1; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=cisco.com; dmarc=pass action=none header.from=cisco.com; dkim=pass header.d=cisco.com; arc=none
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=cisco.onmicrosoft.com; s=selector2-cisco-onmicrosoft-com; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=IeNkQDKlyNzp5VPC7aeOrZ+DarqCnlINPbvgQAlIhW8=; b=odYkG7ieUcxk2xhocEKvv5JEKIAmSzjqhDAck9wgGLSO5sf/4N+Bh/rqlL21iCqk1DobaV/bczS0oaaeWwCpFaSiw3AOMkLjX6AioQW8RQX+cUwmZxkoG8rQH6G84z0sfn2U8URuHo+SLvztSxsE+6tXtCKujEw9YJ9LTLPq99E=
Received: from BYAPR11MB2757.namprd11.prod.outlook.com (2603:10b6:a02:cb::16) by DM5PR11MB0043.namprd11.prod.outlook.com (2603:10b6:4:69::17) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.5186.21; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 20:44:47 +0000
Received: from BYAPR11MB2757.namprd11.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::847a:8866:9384:455c]) by BYAPR11MB2757.namprd11.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::847a:8866:9384:455c%7]) with mapi id 15.20.5186.021; Wed, 27 Apr 2022 20:44:47 +0000
From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Matthew Bocci <matthew.bocci@nokia.com>, "rtg-dir@ietf.org" <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric.all@ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04
Thread-Index: AQHYWk3murQW6l0pf0eZbbDmxpC7Ra0D95gA
Date: Wed, 27 Apr 2022 20:44:47 +0000
Message-ID: <1BE72F1A-AE01-44A4-9B8D-81EE15C4AF6A@cisco.com>
References: <165107434667.986.8513125292645167148@ietfa.amsl.com>
In-Reply-To: <165107434667.986.8513125292645167148@ietfa.amsl.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
user-agent: Microsoft-MacOutlook/16.59.22031300
authentication-results: dkim=none (message not signed) header.d=none;dmarc=none action=none header.from=cisco.com;
x-ms-publictraffictype: Email
x-ms-office365-filtering-correlation-id: 61e3aafa-4e5c-4e7d-8746-08da288ec4aa
x-ms-traffictypediagnostic: DM5PR11MB0043:EE_
x-microsoft-antispam-prvs: <DM5PR11MB004332C02809CD92F61FEC9BC2FA9@DM5PR11MB0043.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
x-ms-exchange-senderadcheck: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-relay: 0
x-microsoft-antispam: BCL:0;
x-microsoft-antispam-message-info: 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
x-forefront-antispam-report: CIP:255.255.255.255; CTRY:; LANG:en; SCL:1; SRV:; IPV:NLI; SFV:NSPM; H:BYAPR11MB2757.namprd11.prod.outlook.com; PTR:; CAT:NONE; SFS:(13230001)(366004)(2616005)(296002)(26005)(6512007)(38100700002)(91956017)(316002)(83380400001)(186003)(33656002)(508600001)(38070700005)(6506007)(122000001)(86362001)(4744005)(5660300002)(36756003)(6486002)(71200400001)(8936002)(76116006)(110136005)(64756008)(66476007)(54906003)(8676002)(66446008)(66556008)(2906002)(4326008)(66946007)(45980500001); DIR:OUT; SFP:1101;
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-chunkcount: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-0: 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
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-ID: <28BFC06E46415D488F780C8E20B482D2@namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: BYAPR11MB2757.namprd11.prod.outlook.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: 61e3aafa-4e5c-4e7d-8746-08da288ec4aa
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 27 Apr 2022 20:44:47.5698 (UTC)
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: 5ae1af62-9505-4097-a69a-c1553ef7840e
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: eMud7jPQv3IyyTmCmAACn5dlH+W1N9ICjlngEOj3ToOrpPcKSbIpTUsGnmNqoKpt
X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: DM5PR11MB0043
X-OriginatorOrg: cisco.com
X-Outbound-SMTP-Client: 173.37.135.124, xfe-aln-004.cisco.com
X-Outbound-Node: rcdn-core-8.cisco.com
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/42ID5wYlXzopXiANizcr3O472O8>
Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04
X-BeenThere: rtg-dir@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.34
Precedence: list
List-Id: Routing Area Directorate <rtg-dir.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/rtg-dir>, <mailto:rtg-dir-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/rtg-dir/>
List-Post: <mailto:rtg-dir@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:rtg-dir-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtg-dir>, <mailto:rtg-dir-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 27 Apr 2022 20:44:55 -0000

Hi Matthew, 

Thanks for your RTG directorate review!!! These can be included in the WG last call comment revisions. I had suggested the exact same change for "to be diverted". 

Hi Co-authors, 

Please include the nits below. 

Thanks,
Acee

On 4/27/22, 11:46 AM, "Matthew Bocci via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
    Review result: Ready

    The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written.
    Thank you!

    I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows:

    Section 2.2:
    "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through',
    to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting
    diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be
    diverted away..."

    Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV
    Please expand 'LLS' on first use.

    Section 6 Procedures, first bullet
    "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by
    any of its neighbors on any of its links..."

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email