[RTG-DIR]Re: Rtgdir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06

"Hejia (Jia)" <hejia@huawei.com> Wed, 06 November 2024 21:08 UTC

From: "Hejia (Jia)" <hejia@huawei.com>
To: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
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Thanks Donald for taking my comments into consideration.

B.R.
Jia

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发件人: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> 
发送时间: 2024年11月3日 22:11
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主题: Re: Rtgdir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06

Hi Jia,

Thanks for the review. Sorry for the tardy reply.

On Thu, Aug 8, 2024 at 11:59 AM Hejia (Jia) <hejia=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
> Hello,
>
>...
>
> Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-06
> Reviewer: Jia He
> Review Date: August 8, 2024
> IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
> Summary:
> This document is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to support credit window based flow control scheme. It is basically ready for publication but has nits that should be considered prior to publication.
>
> No major issues found.
>
> No minor issues found.
>
> Nits:
> 1、Section 1, s/a 3 bit "PCP" field/a 3-bit "PCP" field, s/a 12 bit 
> VLAN identifier (VID) field/a 12-bit VLAN identifier (VID) field

OK.

> 2、Replace the out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12", "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09", and "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14" with the latest version.

OK.

Thanks,
Donald
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> B.R.
> Jia
>
>
> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: Daniam Henriques via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org]
> 发送时间: 2024年6月29日 16:03
> 收件人: Hejia (Jia) <hejia@huawei.com>
> 抄送: Daniam.Henriques@liquid.tech; Zhenghaomian 
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> 主题: For He Jia, Rtgdir Last Call review by 2024-08-08 assigned: 
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension
>
>
> Last Call review of: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension (no 
> specific version)
> Deadline: 2024-08-08
> Pages: 7
> Requested by: Jim Guichard
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> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-ext
> ension/reviewrequest/19874/login/
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> Daniam Henriques has assigned He Jia as a reviewer for this document.

[RTG-DIR]Rtgdir Last Call review: draft-ietf-mane… Hejia (Jia)
[RTG-DIR]Re: Rtgdir Last Call review: draft-ietf-… Donald Eastlake
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