[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-ext-opt-param-07

Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 15 September 2019 04:26 UTC

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

Hello

I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft.
​https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-foo-name/

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-ext-opt-param-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 25-Sept-2019
Intended Status: Proposed Standard

Summary: No issues found. This documents is ready to proceed to the IESG.

Major Comments: N/A

Minor Comments: N/A

Nits:
   You might consider replacing "this" in "the value of this field" in the 2nd
   from last paragraph of section 2.  I knew what it had to refer to, but it
   stalled me and caused me to recheck the grammar twice before I was sure it
   said what it needed to say.  It may confuse some readers.