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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-grow-bgp-gshut-11.txt 
Reviewer: Matthew Bocci 
Review Date: 4th October 2017 
IETF LC End Date: 11th October 2017 
Intended Status: Informational

Summary: 

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:

The document is brief and to the point. I have no concerns about its quality or readability. 


Major Issues:

No major issues found.

Minor Issues:

No minor issues found.

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