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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RTG-DIR Review: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-03.txt


Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir<https://clicktime.symantec.com/3HoggwpVJ3tAkafdde3M5kS6H2?u=http%3A%2F%2Ftrac.tools.ietf.org%2Farea%2Frtg%2Ftrac%2Fwiki%2FRtgDir>

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-03.txt
Reviewer: Alexander (“Sasha”) Vainshtein
Review Date: 26-Dec-19
IETF LC End Date: Not known
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:

I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved before publication.



Comments:

The draft is one of a group of DetNet documents, one of them has been already published as RFC 8655<https://clicktime.symantec.com/3G9XdBmhXdcKZ9XbdXGkvRB6H2?u=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Frfc8655>, while several others are in different stages of the IETF process. Multiple cross-references bet



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