[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04

Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 22 June 2021 10:16 UTC

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Subject: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04

Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
Review result: Has Nits

I have been selected as the RTG DIR reviewer for
draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.

Thanks for the draft. This is clear and well written. I have just a couple of
minor editorial nits, below, that should be fixed prior to publication.

Regards
Matthew

Abstract:
s/Segment SUb-TLV/Segment Sub-TLV

1. Introduction
s/"Protocol in the Segment IS Sub-TLV"/"Protocol in the Segment ID Sub-TLV"

[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-mpls-… Matthew Bocci via Datatracker
Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-m… Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)